please post a thumbnail next time!!

bg needs more work, and i don't like the grainy effect on it or the white brushes with red outer glow.. colors could be a bit better, bg is too monotone.. add some simple but nice text in there, tone down the brushing that makes the light at the bottom of the render, and work on the render blending render effects could be a bit better, and get rid of the white outer glow on it just keep practicing and have a look at our tutorials and you'll improve

I'm not liking the blur too much, brushes are nice though the bg needs work.

Originally Posted by meh

please post a thumbnail next time!!

bg needs more work, and i don't like the grainy effect on it or the white brushes with red outer glow.. colors could be a bit better, bg is too monotone.. add some simple but nice text in there, tone down the brushing that makes the light at the bottom of the render, and work on the render blending render effects could be a bit better, and get rid of the white outer glow on it just keep practicing and have a look at our tutorials and you'll improve

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try some tutorials kid and check for th wallpaper sizes

Originally Posted by meh

please post a thumbnail next time!!

bg needs more work, and i don't like the grainy effect on it or the white brushes with red outer glow.. colors could be a bit better, bg is too monotone.. add some simple but nice text in there, tone down the brushing that makes the light at the bottom of the render, and work on the render blending render effects could be a bit better, and get rid of the white outer glow on it just keep practicing and have a look at our tutorials and you'll improve

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good .. but im dont liking the blur .. is too much hn kaka