Too much blur on the render.Bg is not so good you should use some more textures.Also change the font you can get fonts from sites like 1001fonts.com.

Well mate it's fine but imo you have to work more on it. Everything is too simple, soon try with more layers mate, experiment around Try 500 x 220, it gives you more options. Render is good but could be better. Texture work and bg are too simple and so is the text. My advice, try some tuts and psd files and you'll improve fast. Stay active mate, it will be interesting to follow your improvement

Thanks to both of you