The effect player is good ! But is not a good text ...

For me the sign is not finish, the bg is not completed ...

render looks ok effects are nice
dont like the the wright donnu what is that maybe clliping mask well it's not fit
text is bit simple bbut it's nice add more light
colours are nice
bg need more light do it with rounded brushes
bg looks bit simple add texture man make it looks intersting
keep practice man