Well, mate, you've done better. First of all the stock could've been blended better although the shapes and lines do help in blending the stock better. The many texts are nice, but I think the main text looks a bit low quality tbh. Also, I'm not sure on the effects, maybe you could add some effects, it misses some sort of tjubang! effect

. Background is nice, but maybe you should desaturate the stocks. Keep it up!