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Old 07-18-2008, 12:30 PM   #1

 
This is a collab for our battle, he started it so i want your advice on how to finish it:
 
 

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Old 07-18-2008, 12:36 PM   #2

 
i dont know maybe you should add some textures!!!and add some colours
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Old 07-18-2008, 12:38 PM   #3

 
thanks, anymore advice?
this is not my style and it looks finished so im out of ideas...
do we have a chance to beat dart and sin in a battle?
 
 

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Old 07-18-2008, 01:53 PM   #4

 
Add some more lightning work, and some strong top lightning.
Some textures and maybe a nice splatter brush.
The font should be a bit bigger in my opinion. add a big font in the background in a low opacity.
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Old 07-18-2008, 01:55 PM   #5

 
Firs lighten i tup,then improve the text and try to add some more colours to it imo good luck for it!
 
 
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Old 07-19-2008, 03:19 PM   #6

 
Well doesnt need finishing that much just maybe change the text, lighten it up and also add better colours mate Maybe a blue photofilter
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Old 07-28-2008, 10:25 PM   #7

 
mmm i think it needs more lights and colors mate... it looks too dark and desaturated.
Also move the text a little bit lower and closer to the render.
Render could also be better blended and add some more effects and textures to it!
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